See twinkling eyes that dull with pain
eyes once bright as fire flames
we juggle pills to make it wane
with every day I cry for you
moving now is hard to do
limbs get stuck refusing to
unbend, and move as graceful should,
I wish I could untangle you
dreams that see you run again
walk the miles that never end
play the games we used to do
dance forever, just us two
this once strong man
who laughs with me
now has morphine in his tea
instead of ‘bubbles’ in a glass
thinking of sweet days gone past,
still we can dance, if very slow
so legs don’t stumble, I’ll
not let you go, put on
the music, hold me tight
and yes, it still feels very right
we’ll play the soft and gentle songs
the ones you love, we’ll float along,
I’ll watch your singing eyes
and wish I could, until I die,
I wish I could untangle you
I wish…. I could untangle you
@ Copyright 2007
Sadly poignant and heartrending Ken
Dear Susie
As one reads this beautiful message, they can hear the ‘pain’ that’s crying out in your very soul.
God Bless. You’ve a beautiful and brilliant heart.
God Bless you from Connie (My Space)
When i read this , i feel the tears is running from your eyes, and you try to be strong , more stonger than ever , and expressing your pain and syffer in this page , what a wonderful writings and what great feelings and love inside you heart
Thank you Anonymous for your beautiful comments, it is very kind of you to take the time to enter them . My best wishes to you
Thank you Ken for your good comments.
I wish you could, too.
You are such an elegant poet.
The lines flow effortlessy.
Hope all is well,
Jewel
As i sit and read the latest, i can feel tears running down my face, even though I only saw him yesterday with his graceful smile not even showing a glimmer of his pain. He was so pleased to see us all and i wish i could be there everyday. I love you both so very very much.xx Ellie.x
As always dear Jewel, thank you for your sincere and very kind comments – Hamada is still fighting to win his battle, with the prayers and support of all his family and friends – he thanks you all. with love Susie
So many thanks to our dear Ellie, who’s love and very great support is always there for both of us. This very much loved niece spends some of her precious time coming up to give of herself. She brings treats for her Auntie Susie just to boost my spirits ( thanks for the Jackie O sunglasses this weekend, amongst other lovely gifts ) How we both love her. x
beautiful, just beautiful Love Jojoe
Thanks Jo xxxx
Such a gem, a stunningly beautiful poem all good wishes to you, from josh
Thank you Josh for your wonderful comments and my best wishes to you.
I wish i could untangle you is so poignant and beautifully written- best wishes to you.
what a wonderful poem and website – my best wishes to you both Josie Beamer
Thank you, Jim Parish for your kind words
Thank you Josie, and all best wishes to you to.
To, two very dear friends and the two nicest people I know..
The Poems are lovely, they made me cry, spoken from the heart, I love you both and miss having you up near to me
Love From Claire ( Apps )
Thank you Dear Claire, for your wonderful Comments – I am so glad that you find my poems lovely, You are such a dear friend to us both and your constant support to me has been wonderful – you are indeed what being a friend is all about. Love as always Susie xxx
This poem has moved me to tears – what a wonderful ‘blog’ and a wonderful poet. All the best from Gillian
Thank you Gillian for your very nice comments, all best wishes to you.
Mark Brown thanks you for such lovely poems, i am also suffering at the moment and these poems have brought me such comfort. Bless you
Thank you Mark for your nice commments. I send all good wishes to you and sincerely hope you find some peace
Just wonderful Susie.
Thank you ‘anonymous’ for your nice comments
Yes! it’s still my favourite a wonderful poem of Love, Mark