Brilliant Sunset sinking fast
of pumpkin corals and scarlet reds,
slowly first, as watchful eyes
dream and melt in paradise.
We turn to stare at coloured sky
and watch graceful bird swooping by,
we listen to the palm trees sway
as sun kissed bodies feel close of day,
evening warmth on cooling skin
pleasures seem to merge within.
Sinking slowly, small cirrus streaks
enhance this beauty we love to seek.
Vermilion ambers, Magenta hues
spectacular colours for me and you,
gentle sounds of ebbing waves
this rhythm and flow of life and days…
Why we seek this twilight sky?
this energy that makes us sigh,
that makes our shoulders rest this way
that always takes our stress away.
This colour of power, this colour of
might, this reason to live, this reason
to fight,
this Sunset watched with only you
delicious memories come into view.
With many thanks to Sandy Banks *
http://www.retiredforgood.blogspot.com for allowing me to use these very beautiful photos and for dedicating the top rather special Sunset Photo to us both.*
Sandy said… Your poem prompted me to gift those precious moments as the sun slips down behind the mountain and sea – caught, but not stopped – to you and your beloved… I love your words that bring the essence of a season or a moment into very sharp focus. Thank you again….
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And color my world, you just did! I feel washed in the warm glow of beautiful sunsets. Color IS very powerful and meaningful, especially burgundy for those of us fighting MM. Yet another beautifully “painted” poem. Thank you with love.
Thank you Dear Lora, I was delighted to read your Caring Bridge this week and to know that you are now in complete remission, how happy that makes us feel. You are a wonderful ‘warrior’ and a perfect example with your happy countenance and always positive outlook, stay well my friend.
Phoenix said…
Beautiful sentiments.. this is why I love the blog world… when I see how all our battles within ourselves are so beautifully channeled to create an expression that outlasts us all… My prayers and best wishes for you.
Susie,
Your poetry is expressive and so full of love and hope. I just finished reading most of your entire blog. My husband was diagnosed in April 2009 with adenocarcinoma in his esophagus. It has spread to his bones and he has developed an underlying lymph disorder. The doctors gave him less than five years to live. We were due to retire next year. We have children, grandchildren, brothers and sisters and friends, a huge support team. This journey will come to tax all of us in the years ahead. For now, Barry is blogging about his own cancer journey, an explorer’s view of life, you are welcome to visit. Although we live across the pond, maybe we can help each other on our journeys with strength and support. I would love that. Love and prayers for Hamada and for you.
“The colour of power and the reason to fight.” =D
Barry said…
Beautiful poem Susie. A sunset always lifts my spirits and reduces my stress levels as well.
As does your poetry.
Susie,
My prayer for you tonight (Monday here in California) is that God just blesses your socks off, and those of your dearly beloved husband. Thank you for the kudos; you must know that your feedback keeps me wanting to write. God be with you on your journey today.
Love,
Chris Alba
Another breath taking poem, Susie. Thanks for posting the update of H’s results on your blog.
Beautiful poem Susie. Good thoughts and prayers for Hamada coming your way from Willow Manor.
Hello from Russia!
Can I quote a post in your blog with the link to you?
Magnificent feelings describe this majestic picture. Both such gifts from God. Thank you for sharing your talents.